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The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar graph indicates International sales from the top five smartphone brands around the world from 2009 until 2013.
Overall
, each of the
brand
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brands
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 showed a continuous inclined or declined growth
on
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each year.
For instance
, the number of sold units on
Samsung
, Apple, and ZTE brands kept on getting up.
On the other hand
, for Nokia and LG they decrease from time to time. For
smartphone
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smartphones
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 that experienced inclination, in 2009,
Samsung
 was
on
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at
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it
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its
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 highest at 250
millions
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million
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of
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units sold and the lowest was Apple at 20
millions
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million
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of
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products.
Samsung
 kept on leading for the most stable growth of
number
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the number
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in
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of
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 purchased products until the year 2013.
Additionally
, ZTE had its unsignificant growth, when compared
by
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Samsung
 and Apple.
Smartphone
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Smartphones
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 which experienced
stable
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a stable
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 decrease,
was
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were
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 the lowest in 2013 by LG at 70
millions
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million
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 units and the climax point with Nokia at 430
millions
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million
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 products. Nokia
has
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experienced
significant
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a significant
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 dip from 2011 to 2013, in which the
amount
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number
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 of people buying its goods
was
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dropped from 410
millions
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million
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 to 250
millions
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million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words samsung, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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