The chart shows the total distance travelled passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The chart shows the total distance travelled passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
The graph delineates the total distance passengers
traveled
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on five different kinds of transport in the UK from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, the bus was the most popular means of transport in the UK during the given period.
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, from 1990 to 2000 the use of most vehicles increased excluding
bicycle
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bicycles
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and
motorbike
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motorbikes
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. In detail, the mileage of the bus was the chart-topper in both years at 40 in 1990, exceeding that of rail by roughly 5. These numbers gained about 2 each after a decade. Regarding the distance
traveled
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by air, at the beginning of the
period
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period,
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it was
lowest
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but underwent a five-fold increase after ten years, hitting 5. As to the remaining types of vehicle, both the figure of bicycle and motorbike witnessed a downward trend. In 1990, these kinds registered at under 5 and
was
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reduced by half in 2000. In total,
the
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distance of 100 was recorded over the year 1990, which rose by 10 in the span of
ten
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10
years.
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