The table and charts below provide information about the destinations and employment of UK first degree holders

The provided table shows the destinations of UK graduates in 4 sequential academic years (%),
whereas
the accompanying charts illustrate salary bands for 10 graduates in
employment
in 2009.
Overall
, it is evident that in 2007, full-time
employment
was responsible for the highest in whole years,
on the other hand
, in terms of salary, the proportion of genders who earned more than $40.000 was equal. Close inspection of the table reveals that full-time
employment
experienced a slight fluctuation and reached 63% in 2010.part-time
employment
and study ranged between 7% and 9% with similar patterns to
further
study only and not employed, fluctuating between 16% and 18% compared to 11% and 15% respectively. Turning to the pie-charts, female students took the lead in the salary bands between 20.000 and 24.900 with 32%,
while
men male students were at 26%. A ratio for workers earning more than $40.000 was equal in both sexes, at 29%.
Furthermore
, the people with wages 35.000-40.000 and 5.000-9.000 stood at
last
with a margin of 1-2%.
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