The trend of putting senior family
members
in Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
care
Use synonyms
homes
has Use synonyms
became
prevalent in the past few years. There are several plausible reasons for Change the verb form
become
that phenomena
Change the determiner
that phenomenon
those phenomena
along with
the following outcomes, which will be discussed in Linking Words
this
essay.
Linking Words
Firstly
, family Linking Words
members
do not have adequate Use synonyms
time
. Generally, each member already Use synonyms
engage
with their own business Change the verb form
engages
such
as work or study, Linking Words
hence
make Linking Words
them
cannot allocate Correct pronoun usage
they
time
to take Use synonyms
care
Use synonyms
the
older family Change preposition
of the
members
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, they want Linking Words
a
liberty. Taking Remove the article
apply
care
Use synonyms
ageing
family Change preposition
of ageing
members
Use synonyms
require
others to perform cautious behaviours and create specific environmentsCorrect subject-verb agreement
requires
,
since Remove the comma
apply
they
vulnerable Add a verb
they are
they were
from
certain diseases Change preposition
to
such
as heart Linking Words
attack
. Fix the agreement mistake
attacks
Therefore
, it makes people Linking Words
cannot
easily act Verb problem
not
to
their according, resulting in Change preposition
according to
make
them want to live separately. It can be witnessed through urban residents in Jakarta, where they intentionally send their family Change the verb form
making
members
who are over 65 years old to the elderly house or Panti Jompo in order to have more freedom to Use synonyms
held
parties or Wrong verb form
hold
sociable
events in their house.
The consequence Replace the word
social
from
that decision led Change preposition
of
into
several outcomes. Change preposition
to
From
the positive Change preposition
On
sides
, it can minimise the risks Fix the agreement mistake
side
from
having psychological disturbance. Recent research by Statista unveils that almost 87% of American Change preposition
of
adults
suffer from stress and burnout because they should nurture at least a senior in each household. The primary reason is Use synonyms
due to
the restriction to perform certain behaviours that potentially make the seniors Linking Words
disappoint
or surprised. Wrong verb form
disappointed
Further
, Linking Words
adults
can have Use synonyms
a
better Remove the article
apply
time
management. Imagine if Use synonyms
ones
Replace the word
one
have
to attend Correct subject-verb agreement
has
virtual
meeting with a supervisor, and concurrently the senior family Add an article
a virtual
the virtual
members
need their assistance to take the stairs. Since looking after senior Use synonyms
members
essentially Use synonyms
require
special attention, it can be difficult for some people to manage their personal and professional Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
time
; Use synonyms
therefore
, Linking Words
put
them in Wrong verb form
putting
the
Correct article usage
apply
care
Use synonyms
homes
can be helpful for Use synonyms
adults
as they will Use synonyms
saving
more Wrong verb form
save
times
to focus on their personal or professional matters. Fix the agreement mistake
time
On
Change preposition
In
the
contrast, the action itself potentially Correct article usage
apply
reduce
the intimacy levels between family Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
members
. Since they live in separate Use synonyms
place
, the seniors Fix the agreement mistake
places
are
possibly Unnecessary verb
apply
lost
their contacts and the scarcity to meet each other often, causing a degradation of intimacy between the younger and older Wrong verb form
lose
members
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
adults
can experience Use synonyms
lack
of nutrients. In fact, several nursing Correct article usage
a lack
homes
already scheduled the general menu for meals, which is not adjusted to the requirements of each senior, Use synonyms
hence
it can make their conditions vulnerable to certain Linking Words
illness
.
Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
To conclude
, Linking Words
although
the trend is quite popular these days, the decision to put older family Linking Words
member
in Fix the agreement mistake
members
the
Correct article usage
apply
care
Use synonyms
homes
may be fueled by the unavailability to allocate specific Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
as well as
the act Linking Words
to want
Change preposition
of wanting
a
freedom. Remove the article
apply
Although
it is good for their psychological conditions Linking Words
as well as
Linking Words
time
management, it can reduce Use synonyms
the
intimacy levels and Correct article usage
apply
dangerous
for the health level of Add a missing verb
be dangerous
adults
.Use synonyms
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