The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.
The bar chart illustrates the variety of
middle
school
subjects which students in both middle
school
schools A and B are interested.
Change preposition
in.
According to
the figure, it can be seen that the sport
subject is the most popular in Fix the agreement mistake
sports
school
A. While
, Students in school
B were
intrigued to attend the craft and drawing class the most.
In Change the verb form
was
school
A, a majority of middle
school
students are interested in sport
the most compared to the other subjects, which accounted for 36. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
However
, language interested children
the least, only about 5, which is seven times less than sport
. Language and craft/drawing subjects are held by 5 and 4 children
respectively.
School
B, learners mostly attend to the art related subject, which about 25. Language come
the second place with 18. Change the verb form
comes
On the other hand
, only 5 children
join Correct article usage
the sport
sport
class. The least enjoyed class for Fix the agreement mistake
sports
middle
school
pupils is science, which has only 2 children
joined.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words middle, school, sport, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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