The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the development of cutting
tools
in the Stone Age. This
essay will summarise the information by selecting and reporting main
features.
Correct article usage
the main
Overall
, tool
B
's side
view
was lighther
than Correct your spelling
lighter
Tool
A's side
view
. Also
, their height was the same like 5 cm. And the Tool
B
was bigger than Tool
B
.
First,
Tool
A's three view
shapes were similar to each other. But, Tool
B
's three views were not similar. The side
view
has changed over the 0.6 million-year period. Even though, the two tools
' side
views changed, other
sides of Correct article usage
the other
that
two Correct determiner usage
the
tools
' have not changed well over the year in the question. And that two
Correct article usage
the two
tools
's colors have changed. 1.4 million years ago the tool
's color
was deep grey even 0.8 years ago the cutting Change the spelling
colour
Tool
's colour faded.
The cutting tools
's shape has changed to sharper and added more crystals over the 0.6 million-year period.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tools, tool, b, side, view with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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