The given bar chart indicates total spendings on health care as from percentage perspective of GDP in 12 European countires during the years of 2002, 2007 and 2012.

The given bar chart indicates total spendings on health care as from percentage perspective of GDP in 12  European countires during the years of 2002, 2007 and 2012.
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The given bar chart indicates total
spendings
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spending
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on
health
care
from the percentage perspective of
GDP
in 12 European
countries
during the years of 2002, 2007 and 2012. When looking at the chart at first glance it is obvious that Belgium and Switzerland had the highest expenditure on
health
care
during the
10 year
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period with 10 and over 10 percent of
GDP
respectively. In the meantime , compared to their peers Estonia and Lithuania had the least proportion of their
GDP
spent on
health
with below 6 percent for both of them. Over the Period there were some fluctuations during the years in some of the
countries
. To illustrate
this
, France , Luxembourg and Netherlands experienced an increase in
health
investment
while
countries
like Denmark , Poland , Slovenia , Lithuania and Norway reduced their
health
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healthcare
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care
spendings
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spending
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. The rest of the
countries
( Belgium , Estonia, Spain and Switzerland ) did not change
their
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proportion of their
GDP
spent on
Health
care
over the years with rates of 10 , 3 , 8 and 11 respectively.
Overall
,
it is clear that
spendings
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spending
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on
health
care
differs significantly in 12 European
countries
.
Moreover
, the expenditure fluctuates during the period.
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