The given table shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005

The given table shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005
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A glance at the table provides the percentage consumption of four different fuel kinds for
electricity
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in five Asian countries including Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South Korea and Japan in 2005.
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, the vast majority of the five Asian countries relied on nuclear to generate
electricity
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to a certain degree, whilst the electrical generation in Thailand did not need any nuclear at all in 2005.
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the information shown in the table, 49% of
electricity
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in Japan relied on nuclear and 34% of it relied on other energy types.
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33% of
electricity
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in South Korea depended on nuclear, hydro and wind was 15% higher than nuclear which was the most important source of
electricity
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there. Unlike the rest of the four countries
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petroleum products were the lowest significant fuel source to generate
electricity
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, their demand for generating
electricity
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in Thailand was 36% which was only 6% lower than the most active one, other energy types, by 42%.What should be particularly mentioned is that both Malaysia and Singapore mostly used coal and lignite to generate
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respectively 61% and 42%.
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