The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishment for driving offences.To what extent do you agree/ disagree?
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incidences and will be explained below.
On the one hand , people do not like to cause accidents Linking Words
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mistakes will catch up with someone eventually. Linking Words
For instance
, robots may not be working or pedestrians may not paying attention to what is happening around them. Linking Words
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in Lublin , a lady was rushing to the university institute and she was hit by a car she did not notice that the traffic robots had changed to red.
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, it is said that Paul Walker was racing when he died . Linking Words
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,if someone endangers others , he or she should be banned from driving Linking Words
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if they are drug , high or racing . Linking Words
secondly
, the fine should be increased Linking Words
this
will minimise the offences .
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