the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in usa since 1980 with projections untile 2030

the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in usa since 1980 with projections untile 2030
The provided chart illustrates energy
consumption
in the USA from 1980 to 2030, based on a 2008 report.
Overall
, it is evident that the
consumption
of petrol and oil, coal, and natural gas has increased steadily over time,
while
the
consumption
of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower has shown fluctuating or declining trends The
consumption
of petrol and oil has consistently been the highest, starting at 35
quadrillion
units
in 1980 and projected to reach approximately 50
quadrillion
units
by 2030.
Similarly
, coal and natural gas have shown upward trends,
although
coal
consumption
has remained relatively stable,
while
natural gas
consumption
has fluctuated.
In contrast
, the
consumption
of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower has been lower
overall
. Nuclear
consumption
has steadily increased from approximately 3
quadrillion
units
in 1980 to around 8
quadrillion
units
in 2008, with a projected increase to 11
quadrillion
units
by 2030. Solar/wind
consumption
has shown some fluctuations but has generally increased,
while
hydropower
consumption
has fluctuated and declined over time
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