You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter - Introduce yourself: Roop - explain what is wrong with the furniture ; Washer is not working and one of the sofa in bad condition .Springs from sofa is out - say what action you would like the landlord to take : upgarde the washing sink and fix dinning table
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Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform that
I am not satisfied with your Correct pronoun usage
you that
apartment
furniture because most of things
are in bad condition.
My name is Roopkamal Add an article
the things
kaur
, and I have been living in your Change the capitalization
Kaur
one bedroom
Add a hyphen
one-bedroom
apartment
from
Change preposition
for
last
two months .I moved from California to the United Correct article usage
the last
kingdom
to complete Capitalize word
Kingdom
three
Correct determiner usage
a
years
master's degree in law. Your Correct your spelling
three-year
apartment
is close to the University inluded
all amenities available in it .
Correct your spelling
included
However
, there are some unexpected things has
been going on Wrong verb form
that have
such
as washing
sink Correct article usage
the washing
is
leaking ,and Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
the dinning
dinning
table Correct your spelling
dining
has crack
in the middle . Wrong verb form
cracking
Moreover
, closet
is not Add an article
the closet
a closet
wide
as shown in the picture and Rephrase
as wide
bed
Correct article usage
the bed
make
noise Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
during
night . Change preposition
at
This additional problems
Change the determiner
This additional problem
These additional problems
giving
me stress and Wrong verb form
give
consuming
my half time of the day.
I would like to give a notice in one month advance to leave Wrong verb form
consume
this
place because there are lot
of things in the Change the article
a lot
apartment
that need your attention immediately. I would be glad if you could rennovate
your Correct your spelling
renovate
apartment
before renting in the future .
I look forward to your reply,
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal kaur.Submitted by kmlchahal97 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve the coherence, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central point that is well developed. Additionally, clearer transitions between your paragraphs could help the reader follow your argument more easily.
Task Achievement
While your response addresses the task requirements, providing more specific details about the problems with the furniture would strengthen your letter. Mentioning how these issues affect your daily life could add to the persuasiveness of your request.
Introduction and Closing
Your letter has a clear introduction and an appropriate closing, which is good for the overall structure.
Writing Tone
You maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for writing to a landlord.
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