Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.Why do you think this? What could be done to encourage more people to art

In every tradition throughout the globe,

art

paintings, masterpieces and sculptures have a profound importance. Even though, it is not appreciated by the majority of the populace as their major attention is towards

science

, technology and business.

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to discuss the reasons

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effective measures to tackle it in the subsequent paragraphs. The foremost reason for the diversion of interest from arts towards

science

and business is the lack of acknowledgement and appreciation

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the

art work

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. Even if, there are numerous budding

artists

who are trying their skills in

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field

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the limited resources and opportunities are holding them back

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exponentially.

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it is clear that

science

and IT

teachers

in the colleges are paid good

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remuneration

remunerations

while

the drawing

teachers

have comparably low salaries not only

this

but

also

the

art

trainers appointed every year are one-third of the

science

trainers.

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, inequality between

art

teachers

and

teachers

of other majors is stopping people to not

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and

admire

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artists

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solution to

this

issue would be

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motivational

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by

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officials and well-known

artists

to inspire youth to

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the legacy of

art

and culture for future generations

along with

this

government can boost the wages of

art

educators. As every country has one or two talented

artists

if not more

such

as painters and

sculputers

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sculptors

sculptures

, these eminent personalities can be brought to the schools by the authorities to showcase their talents and

achievments

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achievements

for

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to

inspiration

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them.

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, a

renonwed

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renowned

and only sand

artists

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of India, Sudarshan Patnayak is internationally famous for his

art work

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on sand

can

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organise

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to teach his exceptional skills to

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adults to elevate people's interest in

this

field.

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,

more

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the motivational

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by the governments,

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the

art

forms will disappear.

To conclude

, insufficient platforms and low

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are the prime reasons behind the individuals not pursuing arts, but possible solutions could be inspiring

camps

for teenagers by famous

art

personalities and incentives to the

art

workers to keep

art

alive by teaching young learners.