The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil from grain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the several steps of how ethanol oil is being manufactured.
Overall
,
According to
the figure, it can be seen that there are two products
as a result
of manufacturing processes.
Firstly
,
Grain
which is harvested from the farm
,
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will be stored in
storage
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the storage
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and
then
sent to
mill
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the mill
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at the
mililng
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milling
. After the
grain
is milled, it will be sent to the cooking process, followed by liquefaction to turn the
grain
into water. The liquid needs to be fermented for a
while
before sending them to separate the oil and solids in the distillation process. Fuel ethanol, a clean and clear liquid from the former methods, is now filled in the storages and sent to the fuel market
consequently
. Solids which are called a wet distillers
grain
will be sent into the dryer to get rid
off
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the remaining water within the
grain
. As the
grain
dried, it is now known as DDG (dry distillers
grain
) ,
it
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will be moved to the feed market.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • production
  • ethanol oil
  • grain
  • stages
  • cleaning
  • milling
  • fermentation tank
  • enzymes
  • fermentation
  • convert
  • starch
  • sugar
  • yeast
  • alcohol
  • distillation
  • separated
  • fermented mixture
  • dehydration
  • impurities
  • complex
  • multi-step
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