You are employed full-time and also doing a part-time evening course. You are not able to continue the course. Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter • explain why you cannot continue the course • describe the situation • say what you will be doing about it
Dear Ms. Jackson,
I hope you are well. I am writing an illustration
why
I cannot keep on the piano lesson. The main Change preposition
of why
resson
is that I am employedCorrect your spelling
reason
lesson
a
full-time job, and I don’t have enough time for class, and I can’t even complete my homework.
First of all, Change preposition
in a
This
is a
full-time work Correct article usage
apply
about
restaurant waiters, and the workplace is at 156 Liulin Change preposition
for
road
. It’s only 10 minutes bike ride from my home.
Capitalize word
Road
Moreover
, as you know, the housing pressure is increasing nowadays, and the price of the house I rented has increased. So I have to change to a higher salary job to pay the rent. Meanwhile, your course is about to start at 8 o’clock, but my work time end
at 10 o’clock. I have tried to communicate working hours with the restaurant manager, Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
however
he said it cannot be changed. Add a comma
however,
Lastly
, I want to say that I really enjoyed your music class, because it not only taught me about music,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
helped me adjust my emotions.
Thank you once again!
Sincerely,
Xiyue TangSubmitted by cathyielts22 on
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structure
Try to ensure a clear structure by using paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas or sections of your letter.
flow and coherence
Consider using a range of linking words to help your letter flow better from one idea to the next.
grammar and accuracy
Proofread your letter to correct small grammatical inaccuracies for a more polished result.
task achievement
You’ve successfully communicated the main reasons for not being able to continue the course, which shows a good understanding of the task.
tone
The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, which is suitable for this kind of communication.
greeting and closing
Your letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which is essential in letter writing.
Contractions
Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.
In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.
In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.
Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.
