You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter ◦ thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience ◦ explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ◦ ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do

I hope
this
message finds you well. I'
m
writing to share that I'
m
super delighted with an opportunity to gain experience in the Aramco organisation. I'
m
an engineer so working in
this
company will be beneficial for my professional skills and qualities.
First,
I hope when I finish 3 months, I will be able to communicate easily with clients and employees.
Second,
learning about maintenance tools and machines , especially in emergency cases should be an advantage. Those areas are really crucial for me.
Moreover
, I'
m
completely interested in learning technology programs on computers or laptops.
Also
, is there any manager facility that can help me in my work and a guide to improve my performance? And, requesting information on logistics
such
as working hours, dress code, and location ? Thank you for your time and for assisting me. I'
m
eagerly waiting for your response. It's an honour to work with the Aramco organisation.
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coherence cohesion
While the letter generally flows well, consider breaking it into more distinct paragraphs to improve clarity and focus on each point.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all sentences are fully complete and consider varying sentence length and structure to maintain reader interest.
task achievement
The letter effectively covers all required points: thanking the manager, explaining what you hope to learn, and asking questions about the work experience.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for formal business communication.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciative
  • hands-on experience
  • skill enhancement
  • networking opportunities
  • mentorship
  • organisational structure
  • company ethos
  • onboarding process
  • professional development
  • collaborative environment
  • shadowing
  • logistics
  • corporate attire
  • reporting hierarchy
  • team dynamics
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