The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how the floor plan of a public library looked 20 years ago, and how it looks today.
Overall
, in regards
of
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to
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space planning, a new
room
is constructed for a Cafe in the bottom
right
,
also
the
room
in the upper left is expanded,
while
usage in both spaces has changed since 20 years ago.
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The Childrens
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Childrens
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Children
books department has moved from the upper
right
room
to the upper left
room
thus
providing the first
room
for lectures. Tables and chairs in the middle of the hall have been removed. Self-service gadgets have been utilized in the
right
cornet
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corner
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of the hall just next to the information desk.
Computer
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The computer
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section is
transfered
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transferred
from
upper
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the upper
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to the lower left
room
, latter was used as a reading
room
before. Space
deticated
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dedicated
for
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to
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Fiction books has increased in both
children
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children's
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and
adults
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adult
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departments, in the upper left
room
and
right
part of the hall, in order.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, right with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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