The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how the floor plan of a public library looked 20 years ago, and how it looks today.
Overall
, in regards of
space planning, a new Change preposition
to
room
is constructed for a Cafe in the bottom right
, also
the room
in the upper left is expanded, while
usage in both spaces has changed since 20 years ago.
Correct article usage
The Childrens
Childrens
books department has moved from the upper Correct your spelling
Children
right
room
to the upper left room
thus
providing the first room
for lectures. Tables and chairs in the middle of the hall have been removed. Self-service gadgets have been utilized in the right
cornet
of the hall just next to the information desk.
Correct your spelling
corner
Computer
section is Correct article usage
The computer
transfered
from Correct your spelling
transferred
upper
to the lower left Correct article usage
the upper
room
, latter was used as a reading room
before. Space deticated
Correct your spelling
dedicated
for
Fiction books has increased in both Change preposition
to
children
and Change noun form
children's
adults
departments, in the upper left Fix the agreement mistake
adult
room
and right
part of the hall, in order.Submitted by soroush.nezami on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, right with synonyms.
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