Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the evolution of a town called Tarnagul in Australia from 1900 to 2000.
Overall
, the charts show that the spaces used for exploitation and production stopped working over time.
In addition
, the road and the river are the only things that have not changed during
this
time period. In 1900 and 1950, the citrus production developed itself, representing over 50% of the terrain, but in 2000, the agricultural spaces were used for other objectives: creating a wildlife sanctuary,and a park, and leaving some spaces unused.
Furthermore
, the dairy industry fainted away in only 50 years like the lemons and grape-fruit culture. Over the years, some establishments were built and others destroyed.
Moreover
, the town area progressively increased from 1900 to 1950 and
then
dropped in the 2000s, taking only the same space as the park .
Additionally
, institutions
such
as the packing sheds and the railway station, which had its tracks removed, disappeared and were transformed into a local museum, tourist shop and craft market.
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