Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Various

museum

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museums

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charge entry fees,

whereas

some

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free of cost

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visits. It is imperative to scrutinize the positive and negative aspects of

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payment.

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essay will delve into the depth and will present relevant reasons why

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of the admission fees

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the benefits.

To begin

with the main perks, it provides financial

supports

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to develop

museum

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and charging a minimal fee develops

the

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sense of responsibility

into

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visitors.

In other words

, the amount accumulated by the entry charges can help

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to invest in museums,

Additionally

, preserving things in a

museum

demands money.

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, a person who has

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a

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money to see the cultural monuments will be more responsible to see how not to harm things. On the downside, admission fees will refrain middle-class and lower-class

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from visiting

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. To explain, it will become difficult for families who

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interest

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in cultural privilege but do not have enough

finance

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to spend on extra activities like

this

;

consequently

,

this

will lead to

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feelings

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of inequality and negative feelings towards the governments.

Moreover

, schools will not arrange free visits for the students.

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, in

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article from London stated that

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forty-five

percent

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of children

adapts

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cultural values by knowing history from a

museum

. No

museum

visits will lead to no historical

values

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in sophomores.

To conclude

,

although

charging

entry

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fee has some advantages like financial support and

developed

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sense of responsibility, it has several pitfalls

such

as

,

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refraining some

population

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populations

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from acquiring knowledge,

feeling

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feelings

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of inequality and hate towards the legislation.