Children spent a lot of time watching TV and playing computer games, however it does not improve their mental abilities. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a huge number of

children

now spending a ridiculous amount of time in front of their TV or computer. It is the opinion of

this

writer that playing video

games

and watching TV does not enhance

children

’s intellectual or mental skills. It is crucial to understand that staring at a computer screen for hours will cause very few areas of

their

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brain to

active

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.

Due to

the fact that, currently, most

children

have autism, language disorders or

fattigue

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fatigue

partly because their parents let them use electronic devices too much,

instead

of having health promotion activities.

As a consequence

, these

children

will be disadvantaged in terms of physical and mental health.

Therefore

, activities like reading or drawing

activates

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many areas of the brain.

In addition

, physical activity

also

helps with brain development. Another key component of the case for spending too much time

for

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games

and television can affect

children

's thoughts and

behavior

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. It should be self-evident that parents cannot completely control the content that their

child

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receive. In

this

situation, many

children

learn negative things through violent video

games

or depraved movies. It must be noted that young

children

often tend to imitate what they see and think it is right.

As a result

, there are some tragic accidents or serious incidents

occurred

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because of

children

’s impulsiveness.

To sum up

, it can be seen that movies and

games

have a great influence on the development process of teenagers. For that reason, it should have been demonstrated that creative activities will contribute to bringing more benefits to

children

.