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The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
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The given two pie charts illustrate the variance in
population
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 in a century from 1900.
This
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 change can be seen in percentages.
Overall
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, the whole
population
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 grew significantly in 100 years. At a superficial glance, in 1900, the majority two-third of
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population
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the population
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 resided in Asia and Europe which reduced by 14% from 60% to 54% and 25% to 14% respectively.
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 the other one-third rose almost twice in a century. At a close glance, it can be observed a
population
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 shift of 14% from two-thirds to the whole
population
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 to one-third which rose to the North African
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 from 4 to 10%.
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 other countries from the remaining one-third constantly grew with no percentage change.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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