The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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cement

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making process by equipment and usage of

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to produce concrete for building purposes.

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, the five types of equipment are used

such

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as a crusher,

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, rotating heater, grinder and bags,

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however

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the concrete production's ingredients have

got

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tree

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three

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types of elements apart from

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. For

cement

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production, the first stage is that limestone and clay are put into the crusher to make powder. The second stage is powder is sent into the

mixer

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then

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it will transfer to the rotating heater by pipe which connects the

mixer

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and the rotating heater.

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stage is the grinder

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the

cement

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. The

last

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process is the

cement

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is packed

bags

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into bags

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. For

concrede

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concrete

production is work with gravel.

Cement

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, water, sand and gravel are

pu

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put

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a concrede

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concrede

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concrete

mixer

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to

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building purposes. The gravel accounted for the most proportion at 50

percent

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per cent

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whereas

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the percentage of sand is the least.