Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the work places. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a possitive or negative impact on society?

In today's digital age, there is a rise in
robots
and AI technologies which are being created to replace
people
in the factory.
This
writer believes that
this
is a negative development
due to
bringing unemployment
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into
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work place
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workplace
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and
danger
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of AI. It must be understood that having
a
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robots
alter to
people
in factories can have a negative impact on
people
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work and
finance
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finances
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.
This
is especially so if the company produce
robots
or other dependences on AI because it can create unemployment
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for
people
who work as
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employee.
Therefore
, it
allow
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the factory to do many things
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just one machine. Having flexible working means that do not need a lot of
people
to finish.
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, with the improvement of technology, many
factory
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factories
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choose to pay for one machine better than pay for one hundred
people
because it's flexible and
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money. Another argument worth considering
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AI technologies can be dangerous to
human
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humans
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. When
robots
have enough time to enhance themselves,
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they
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can be very intelligent and with their
strengh
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strength
and
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,
robots
can kill
people
all over the world.
Consequently
,
people
and some
animal
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will extinct.
For instance
,
according to
an article published in the New York
times
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in 2021, some famous
people
agree that
people
should reduce robot or AI production because it can dominate the world in the future. In conclusion, there are more negative
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than
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positive ones
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, including
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their effect
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effect
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effects
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on
people
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life
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lives
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.
Therefore
, those
robots
should
also
be reduced to manage the workplace for
people
.
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