Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

AI and
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are now being upgraded for being used in
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instead
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that
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life quality and is a positive
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global development.
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and AI to be developed. In fact,
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and
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can do things that normal
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can't do and they can
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the task in the most efficient way.
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,
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and
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now
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communicate and
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nearly like
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so they can easily understand human
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, Chat GPT is the AI
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easily with high precision.
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, Chat GPT can communicate like a real human and entertain us if we want.
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and artificial intelligence bring us many
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benefits and positive changes, they even can help
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in
house work
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like cleaning, cooking,
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Nissan. Nissan can able to cook the food that
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owner
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or clean the floor every time the owner
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out.
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with
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as same as Chat GPT. In conclusion, for many
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above,
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believe that the positive impact of AI and
robot
development
outweighted
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outweighs
the negative.
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