The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram indicates the recycling process of
glass
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that this
cyclical process contains six main stages, beginning with throwing the glass
waste into the recycle bin and ending in the supermarkets.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, first of all, the glass
waste is dumped into the special bins which should only contain glass
. Secondly
, the accumulated waste is loaded onto trucks to deliver to the treatment plant. In this
stage of the process, the particular machine is used for washing and sterilising the material.
After being sterilised, the glass
is heated to a certain degree to melt and be easy to crush with the help of another machine. Subsequently
, the melted glass
is poured into the moulding machine to give them
any shape needed. Correct pronoun usage
it
Finally
, recycled glass
is filled with different liquid materials, and then
, these various products are delivered to supermarkets in trucks and ready to reuse them.Submitted by writingbhos on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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