The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that this
chemical trial can be grouped into three main stages: collecting the raw materials, forming those materials into pots, and finishing the action by heating and colouring them.
The first stage of the system is to dig up and transport the raw materials to factories where they are then
crushed and mixed with water to make them into a clay-like substance that can be molded into the shape of a pot. From there, they must dry for 4-6 hours in moulds in order to fix them into their final shape.
They are then
placed in an oven and heated to over 1000 degrees Celsius. Following
this
, the pots are coloured and a ‘firing’ stage in the oven sets the paint pigments in place, finalising the procedure.Submitted by goodnight on
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