Some people think that water is the most important natural resource. Others believe that other resources (such as oil and gold) are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, resources and supplies have a high value in the environment. Some argue that the

first

place of sources belongs to

water

,

while

other people believe there are more vital supplies like oil. In my perspective,

water

is the main feature, existing in

this

world.

Hence

, In

this

essay, I will delve into both statements. On the one hand,

water

is

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might be considered as a mother of nature. To clarify, it is

widly

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widely

accepted that flora and

fuana

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fauna

need

water

to stay alive.

For instance

, many

first

villages and

fram

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farm

lands

located

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near rivers, lakes, and the sea in the past.

Furthermore

, most farmers need

water

to plant and grow their products, necessary to use as

human's

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food. Needless to say, any human

need

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to drink at least 7

glass

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of

water

in a day

as well as

other creatures

in

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this

planet.

As a result

,

human's

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humans

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survive

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is required

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the

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water

as the most important thing suppliment.

In

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the other hand, other features like fuel, wind, and gold might be necessary in order to process and

development

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. Clearly, industry

need

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first

material to produce some

out-puts

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like vehicles, tools and more things,

can

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that can

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help humans to do their tasks.

For example

, the

jewerelly

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jewellery

productions use gold to make beautiful ears and

necklesses

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necklaces

neckless

or stones are mostly required for building.

Moreover

,

the

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transportation is another area,

independing

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depending

in

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these sources like wind and oil. Obviously, most ships are moved by wind and most

cars

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motors work with fuel,

extrcating

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extracting

extricating

extraction

by oil.

Consequently

, many contents are

cruial

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crucial

for technology development and

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humans

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human

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future. In conclusion,

while

some individuals think

water

is the

first

priority of

human

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, others argue that there are many other important resources. In my view,

water

have

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been

first

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supply to

keep

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survive, despite the fact that other features can be effective

to improve

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quality of life.