The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the changes that happened in the
docks
named Liverton from 1980 to nowadays. Looking from
overall
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perspectives
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, the main change is that the
docks
were transformed into a special museum.
Also
, the accommodations were entirely replaced by modern facilities, and some of the empty places were built
new
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buildings.
Besides
, the way to the coast was closed. In 1980, the
docks
functioned and worked normally. Ships cruised in large numbers and stopped only to load and unload goods, which were in three special stores. Two of them were on the north part of the river and one was opposite them.
However
today, all of the aspects of the
docks
have been changed, and the place has become a museum. And only remaining is the old ship. So, the exit to the sea was closed because of the new bridge, which connected the two shores. Between two rebuilt buildings Education Center and Kid's playground, which in the past were warehouses, was constructed sailing club.
While
on the other shore, hotels, Apartments and Parking places were erected.
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