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The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
three
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 maps indicate their transformation in some areas
such
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 as
farmland
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, river, brindell, animal habitats and woodland between 1800, 1900 and 2000.
Overall
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, there has been a big change for
three
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 centuries, just only crop
farmland
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 has constantly remained in the
three
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 centuries.
To begin
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 with, in the 1800s year, there were crop
farmland
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, woodland, river stour,
brindell
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brindle
 and animal habitats,
while
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 in the 1900s, there was a slight change, including adding some industries, Bun Hill village for workers living in animal habitats.
In addition
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, in the 1900s, woodland was smaller than in the 1800s.
On the contrary
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, in the 2000s, there was a significant transformation, including the addition of many more industrial buildings and extended Bun Hill village for workers than in the 1900s.
Also
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, Bun Hill Park was on the woodland side in the 2000s,
whereas
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this
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 could not be seen in the 1800s and 1900s. Ultimately, Crop
farmland
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 remained unchanged in the
three
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 centuries.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, farmland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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