the charts below show tha average percentages in meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

the charts below show tha average percentages in meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The set of pie charts presents a picture of three ingredients in the US's meal consumption.
Overall
,
it is clear that
dinner is the dominant in both sodium and saturated fat.
Snacks
are the biggest proportion in the added sugar category. The breakfast has the lowest percentage in all three graphs. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that in the sodium graph, dinner
is
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43% which is the highest among others.
Subsequently
, lunch is 29%, which is nearly double the figure for
snacks
or breakfast. About saturated fat, the percentage ranking is almost the same as sodium, but one thing different is
snacks
. In
this
part, the
snacks
group has a bigger number than
breakfast's
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. In the added sugar diagram, the
snacks
sector's number is much more than the other
sectors'
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. The
snacks
in
this
diagram are about 42%, and
other
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group
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are less than 25%.
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