The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line chart provides the percentage of
household
recycling in three different countries in Europe including the UK,
France
and Germany
frome
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from
2005 to 2015.
Overall
, the vast majority of the
household
recycling rates in the three countries witnessed
growths
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in the given decade, whilst the
household
recycling
rate
in
France
dropped.
According to
the information shown in the chart, the family recycling
rate
in
France
was the highest among the
thiee
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three
areas in 2005 which was 50%,
however
, it plummeted to 30% from 2005 to 2013 and had a 10% increase between 2013 and 2015. Unlike the tendency in
France
, the German
household
recycling
rate
kept rising in the given ten years and skyrocketed from 20% to almost 50%.
Although
the
rate
in British
increused
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increased
25
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% from 35% to 60% and became the highest in 2015, it plateaued
on
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40% between 2007 and 2009, What should be particularly mentioned is that
French
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the French
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family recycling
rate
was the lowest in the three regions after a decade.
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