The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
What the bar graph presents is the buying and drinking habits of
Australia
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people in five cities.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the ranking of the three different styles is purchasing fresh
coffee
, instant
coffee
, and visiting a cafe shop Looking at the graph more closely one can see that going to a cafe' for
coffee
or tea in
last
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the last
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4 weeks is the category that accounted
the
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most in four cities.
However
, in Adelaide, it was not that popular, and it was only 35% which was close to the group
of
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buying fresh
coffee
. The second popular type in most locations was buying instant
coffee
, and the exception was still the same in Adelaide. Buying fresh
coffee
without a doubt was the least
favorite
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option in every place. The figures
of
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for
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fresh
coffee
buying in Hobart and Melbourne were exactly the same at 72%, and the same
percentages
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pattern
also
happened in the sector of instant
coffee
buying in Hobart and Brisban.
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