The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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three different diagrams illustrate the Brindell layout and how it changed between 1800 and 2000. By comparing the three Brindell,
it is clear that
the area has undergone several developments
along with
improvements to infrastructure for people which include the construction of a new park, and a village for workers. Looking at the first map, the layout of Brindell from 1800 to 1900 seems very simple and underdeveloped.
Firstly
, the most noticeable feature of the area is the woodland
that is
located northeast site was reduced in
size
.
Also
, there were few industries next to the river stour and there were small villages for workers at
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Bun Hill. By looking at the third diagram, the woodland was smaller in
size
again and in the place of the woodland, a park and hill were added in the year 2000.
Furthermore
, many industry was added at the same location.
In addition
, even though the river stour was reduced in
size
, the town for workers and brindle was bigger in
size
for the year 2000.
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