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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
statistic
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 information about the marital status of Canada and Australia.
In addition
, it is obvious that there is
not
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no
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same sex
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same-sex
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 marriage in Australia.
Overall
, it can be seen that
majority
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the majority
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 of the population in both nations have
same
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the same
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 trends in common. Married and separated
takes
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take
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 most of the proportions, whilst, widowed, divorced and
never married
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never-married
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 ones usually
hits
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hit
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 rock bottom. Just over 80% of people in Canada are
whether
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married or separated, at 53% and 29% respectively. After that,
proportions
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the proportions
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 of people who are never married and widowed are equal at 7%.
Subsequently
,
same sex
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 marriage takes up to 3%
in
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of
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 that chart. Eventually, only 1% of all Canadians are registered as divorced. Following the same trend,
sum
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the sum
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 percentage of married and separated people
fills
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is
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 87%, each being at 41% and 47%. Followed by 5% of single and 6% of widows.
Finally
, 2% of
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the populations
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populations
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population
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 are divorced
in
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at
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 some point
of
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in
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 their lives.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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