The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. USA,France, malaysia, Brazil and Egypt

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from 1995 to 2010. To overview,

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place in the highest

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Brazil and Egypt show the lowest

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tourists

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others. In the beginning, from 1995 to 2000, Malaysia, Brazil,

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increased sightly where

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in France

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up gradually and that was nearly 25 million. From 2000 to 2005 France’s

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fractionated

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the USA

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shows slightly decreased which was about 82 million.

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, from 2005 to 2010,

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upward trend

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80 million.

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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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105 words

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International tourist arrivals
Trends
Highlighting
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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. USA,France, malaysia, Brazil and Egypt

Should high school students be required to study many different subjects at the same time, or should they study only three or four subjects at a time? Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries it is now illigal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.