The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The pie charts compare online shopping in terms of spending for commercial sectors (travel, film,
books
, and
clothes
) in New Zealand over a decade from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, people spent a lot of money on travelling and entertainment,
while
the expenditure on
books
and
clothes
was less over the time given in the figure. In 2003, the greatest proportion of sales was on vocations, which represented 36 % of the total expenditure,
whereas
the lowest percentage was experienced by
books
with 19%. Meanwhile, the average rates for film, music, and
clothes
were almost the same percentage, 21% and 24%, respectively.
By contrast
,people had a greater tendency to spend on film and music than travelling after ten years, at 33% and 29%, respectively. The smallest proportion of online shopping was on
clothes
which accounted for 16%, which was 6 per cent lower than the average cost of
books
(22%) in 2013.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, clothes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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