The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The maps illustrate the changes in Rye Mouth Village from 1995 to
present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, it can be seen that there is
a lot of extensive developments with regards to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
expansion
of housing, replacement, Add an article
the expansion
removement
and construction of new buildings and facilities.
In 1995, Correct your spelling
movement
in
Change preposition
on
south
side, there was Add an article
the south
a
farmland and Correct article usage
apply
forest
park was Correct article usage
a forest
contructed
. In front of the farming Correct your spelling
constructed
area
there was Add a comma
area,
also
a space which provided for residents housing that accomodating
about 9 buildings. Directly, facing these houses, Correct your spelling
accommodated
the
several shops were Correct article usage
apply
also
erected, which equipped
with some fish markets across the road. In front of the forest park, the hotel and cafe Add a missing verb
were equipped
existed
which Wrong verb form
exist
separated
by the road to facilitate Add a missing verb
are separated
the
tourism or local people. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, there was a fishing port in the sea to facilitate everyone who desired to catch the fish.
Nowadays, there were
Wrong verb form
are
also
several developments that occur
in the Village of Rye Mouth. The farming site and woodland were diminished and replaced by Wrong verb form
have occurred
the
Correct article usage
apply
sport feature
Fix the agreement mistake
sports features
such
as golf and tennis field
. The resident state was expanded and Fix the agreement mistake
fields
containing
Wrong verb form
contained
greater
number of houses. The shops Add an article
a greater
was
removed and many new restaurants Change the verb form
were
are
erected in Wrong verb form
were
those area
. Similar Change the determiner
that area
those areas
with
the shops, Change preposition
to
fish-selling
area was replaced by many housing buildings namely apartments. Correct article usage
the fish-selling
In addition
, a new car park is built near hotel
, with a cafe across the road. Add an article
the hotel
Finally
, the place which became for everyone who want
to catch the Change the verb form
wants
fishes
is removed.Fix the agreement mistake
fish
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