The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given map illustrates the improvement of the village of Rye
mouth
between 1995 and Capitalize word
Mouth
present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that there is no big change througout
the period, Correct your spelling
throughout
while
there is an additional branch street and the farmland
and forest park
now is being replace
with Change the verb form
is being replaced
is replacing
golf
field and tennis court.
In 1995, there was Correct article usage
a golf
fishing
port southern of the village at the sea, which Correct article usage
a fishing
it
actually included Correct pronoun usage
apply
fish
market right on the coast. Across the fish market, there was Correct article usage
a fish
shop
, and to the east of Add an article
a shop
the shop
both
there was Add a comma
both,
Correct article usage
a conjuction
conjuction
, which placed Correct your spelling
conjunction
hotel
right at the intersection, leading to the main street of the village. Correct article usage
a hotel
Cafe
was placed across the hotel, still on the beach area. Eastern of the main road, there was Add an article
The cafe
forest
Correct article usage
a forest
park
and farmland
, while
housing was mainly located the opposite of the road. There were also
several house
that Change to a plural noun
houses
built
near the Add a missing verb
were built
farmland
, but actually on the edge of the main street.
Regarding present developments, the fishing port is erased and the fish market is being replaced with apartments, following the shop center that now functions as Correct article usage
a restaurants
restaurants
. There is Fix the agreement mistake
restaurant
also
reduction
Correct article usage
a reduction
for
the greeneryChange preposition
in
,
since the Remove the comma
apply
farmland
and forest park
replaced with golf
field and tennis court. Correct article usage
a golf
Moreover
, the hotel now has it
own car Change the pronoun
its
park
, and the housing is extended to the new branches road.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words farmland, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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