The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
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The two pie charts compare the cutting-edge technologies by Canadians aged 18 to 25 years old to facilitate TV channels that were recorded between 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the figures show an upward and downward pattern during observations.
In addition
,
while
, the number of tablet lovers increased, the old TV actually went downhill
at the end
of the period. On the one hand, conventional TVs, laptops, and desktop computers tended to decline their number in 2019.
Moreover
, it was inevitable that the former dropped significantly by almost ninefold at the of the period. Meanwhile, the remaining gadgets went into a slight decline just under 10% to the same point.
On the other hand
, tablets rocketed over 250% in 2019 that it initiated at only 5% popularities in 2009.
In contrast
, at the second place, flat-screen TVs kept up to go up considerably to 27%, which was one level higher than smartphone users.
Finally
, the ladder could jump the number from 15% to 26%.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • gadgets
  • utilized
  • age categories
  • watching TV channels
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • notable trends
  • increase/decrease
  • devices
  • decade
  • advancements in technology
  • user preferences
  • speculation
  • future trends
  • conclusion
  • implications
  • technology and media companies
  • lifestyle
  • habits
  • target age group
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