The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville,Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville,Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The provided maps illustrate how the town of Kimsville changed over a twenty-year period between 2002 and 2024.
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, there was considerable development of public facilities and it gradually transformed from a small rural village into a residential area. The most notable change is that in 2002 Kimsville had a huge factory on the east side of the city center.
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, it has been demolished and replaced with a software company.
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,
due to
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the shortage of places to live, new apartments have been constructed in the
north west
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northwest
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of Kimsville. On the west side of the city
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centre
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center
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a new train station has been established.
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, in 2002 the south side of the area was surrounded by trees.
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, the trees were chopped down and in their
place
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place,
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a football stadium
has been
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built. An old cinema was situated in the south of the city
center
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in 2002.
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, the old cinema was reconstructed and converted into a pub.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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