The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville,Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The provided maps illustrate how the town of Kimsville changed over a twenty-year period between 2002 and 2024.

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, there was considerable development of public facilities and it gradually transformed from a small rural village into a residential area. The most notable change is that in 2002 Kimsville had a huge factory on the east side of the city center.

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, it has been demolished and replaced with a software company.

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due to

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the shortage of places to live, new apartments have been constructed in the

north west

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northwest

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of Kimsville. On the west side of the city

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centre

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center

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center,

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a new train station has been established.

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, in 2002 the south side of the area was surrounded by trees.

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, the trees were chopped down and in their

place

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place,

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a football stadium

has been

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built. An old cinema was situated in the south of the city

center

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in 2002.

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, the old cinema was reconstructed and converted into a pub.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

161 words

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The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville,Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The practice of illegally hunting wild animals continues to cause concern in many countries, particularly developing countries. What are the causes of such hunting? What are the effects on the animals, and on the wider human society in these countries and beyond?

It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more developing countries are expanding their tourist industries. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive development?

You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •say about the concert •say why you are unable to go •inform how your friend can receive the ticket