The diagram shows the production of hydro-electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the production of hydroelectricity works.
Overall
, the process includes many tubes going from the reservoir yet, the entire production does not only rely on them. Linking Words
Moreover
, the powerhouse contains another instrument called a generator.
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Firstly
, the water gets sucked in by a penstock Linking Words
that is
directly connected to a reservoir in order to spin a turbine. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the H2O goes through a turbine, which starts spinning thanks to the force of the current and gets discarded under the long-distance power lines.
In continuation, the spinning tool down the generator powers the entire powerhouse Linking Words
due to
the important force of the pushed water so, it generates electricity that goes straight into the long-distance power lines. A noticeable element of Linking Words
this
chart is the level of each component of the production of hydro-electricity. Linking Words
In addition
, some of the elements are under the surface like the penstock and the turbine, Linking Words
while
others, Linking Words
such
as the generator and the lines, lie on top of it.Linking Words
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