The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The two pie graphs illustrate how Canadian teenagers and young adults watched their TV programs in 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, it was very clear throughout the data, that in the past time, young people commonly used more traditional ways to watch their favourite programs, because conventional resources were the highest preference.
On the other hand
, in 2019 individuals' preferences were more modern electronic devices,
such
as tablets and cell phones.
First,
the number of tablet users dramatically increased. Almost four times the number, reaching nineteen per cent in 2019.
Second,
traditional television presented one of the highest drops ending with four per cent of the watchers. But, flat-screen TV had shown a sharp growth reaching almost a third of preferences.
In addition
, laptops
as well as
desktop computers had shown a significant dip from 2009 to 2009.
However
, the number of people, which enjoyed smartphones rose from 2009 to 2019.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • gadgets
  • utilized
  • age categories
  • watching TV channels
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • notable trends
  • increase/decrease
  • devices
  • decade
  • advancements in technology
  • user preferences
  • speculation
  • future trends
  • conclusion
  • implications
  • technology and media companies
  • lifestyle
  • habits
  • target age group
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