The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The provided line graph
show
us information about the number of crimes which Change the verb form
shows
occured
in three Correct your spelling
occurred
occur
diffrent
categories in Newport Correct your spelling
different
city
within a decade starting from 2003. At first glance, Capitalize word
City
amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
burglary
went down rapidly Fix the agreement mistake
burglaries
while
car theft and robbery remained stable over the period.
In 2003 the number of burglary incidents was just below 3500 following year it reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
peak at nearly 4000 and Correct article usage
a
then
, the amount of burglary
went down dramatically and went beyond Fix the agreement mistake
burglaries
of
car theft Change preposition
apply
then
in 2008 which is the lowest point at just above 1000. Between 20008 and 2012, it remained at the same level.
In 2003 car theft and robbery were nearly 500 and 2500. Until 2005 they moved upward slowly Rephrase
apply
then
,in 2006 that was falling
year Correct article usage
a falling
both
of them. They experienced Change preposition
for both
same
trend following 5 years, they Change the article
the same
flactuate
.Correct your spelling
fluctuated
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