The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
As for the weather circumstances in the East region of Africa, a glance at the figure provided reveals some data.
While
the line graph illustrates the mean monthly
temperature
, the bar chart gives information about the average monthly precipitation. It is evident from the information gathered that in April the region usually experiences the highest
rainfall
at approximately 260 millimetres.
Also
, March and May in the first half of the year and October to December in the second half of the year have higher
rainfall
in a range between 100 and 170 millimetres
whereas
, the other months see a negligible amount of
rainfall
at less than 50 millimetres. More importantly, the richest month in the
rainfall
is the hottest too at 24 Celsius degree. The
temperature
in the other five months with higher
rainfall
is a bit lower between 20.5 and 21.7 Celsius degree, meanwhile, it is below 19.5 Celsius degree in poorer months in terms of
rainfall
. Worthwhile to note is the fact that between the
rainfall
and
temperature
, there is a positive correlation.
In other words
, following an increase in the
temperature
, a climb in the precipitation is highly likely and vice versa.
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