The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The map illustrates the improvement of the village of Rye Mouth from 1995 to the present.
Overall
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, the village has been transformed and developed significantly, with
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increase in dwelling areas.
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, greener areas have been reduced. Notably, a large farmland and forest park were replaced by an
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for golf and tennis. Compared to the past, the village population has been increasing,
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more residence
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was added. When it comes to housing, 4 housings were constructed
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the original housing
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.
In addition
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, a lane was developed along
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area
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. Regarding the refurbishment, various shops were transformed into restaurants and a fish market was replaced by apartments, which are located on the southwest corner of the map.
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, a place for parking was added to the right side of the hotel.
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, a small cafe remained as it did.
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, a fishing port disappeared as the fish market was knocked down.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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