The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the significant changes
of
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the outskirts of Fosbury
town
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over the 35-year period from 1980 to 2015.
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,
this
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town
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experienced substantial development with the extension of the commercial area. One of the dramatic innovations was the construction of the roundabout in the
center
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of the
town
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, which connected roads to it. On the industrial side, the most notable change had been the fields which were replaced by the warehouses in 2015. With regard to the commercial area,
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the hotel had remained untouched, the terraced houses had been demolished to make room for the car park and the supermarket.
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, the grocer's shop and block of flats had
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been torn down. Another major change to the area was the removal of the park to the right in order to erect the larger terraced houses. The second car park was developed adjacent to the sports
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which altered the tennis courts.
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, the
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had preserved the original houses.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural layout
  • open spaces
  • housing areas
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • road networks
  • commercial areas
  • economic growth
  • green spaces
  • urban expansion
  • public amenities
  • community development
  • demolished
  • renovated
  • modernization process
  • transportation infrastructure
  • landscape modification
  • environmental conservation
  • preservation
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