The table below shows the percantage of mobile phones owners using various mobile features in 2006 2008 and 2010

The table below shows the percantage of mobile phones owners using various mobile features in 2006 2008 and 2010
The chart presents the data about the amount of smartphone users' application usage in
percent
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during
2006
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the 2006
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- 2010th years. In a summarization, making calls was the feature everyone used back in the day
while
playing music and recording videos were considered the least used ones. Regardless of the year, the feature of utilizing cameras and various messengers was highly popular and its usage percentage fluctuated between 60-80%. Another activity
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playing games wasn't an option since no
such
were invented in 2006, but that abruptly changed after 2 years, increasing by 25%.
Then
, no information about the search through the Internet was given for 2006,
however
, it shows a clear contrast between 2008 and 2010 how only in
few
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years the numbers of people who started attending different social media and browsers more frequently: from 41% to 73%. The least applied features were listening to music and filming videos (the
last
one doesn't have clear statistics for 2006) and wavered between 10% to 35%. The most needed mobile feature back
then
and now was making and perceiving calls with 100% of the phone users.
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