The table below shows the percantage of mobile phones owners using various mobile features in 2006 2008 and 2010

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The chart presents the data about the amount of smartphone users' application usage in

percent

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per cent

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during

2006

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the 2006

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- 2010th years. In a summarization, making calls was the feature everyone used back in the day

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playing music and recording videos were considered the least used ones. Regardless of the year, the feature of utilizing cameras and various messengers was highly popular and its usage percentage fluctuated between 60-80%. Another activity

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apply

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playing games wasn't an option since no

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were invented in 2006, but that abruptly changed after 2 years, increasing by 25%.

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, no information about the search through the Internet was given for 2006,

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, it shows a clear contrast between 2008 and 2010 how only in

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a few

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years the numbers of people who started attending different social media and browsers more frequently: from 41% to 73%. The least applied features were listening to music and filming videos (the

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one doesn't have clear statistics for 2006) and wavered between 10% to 35%. The most needed mobile feature back

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and now was making and perceiving calls with 100% of the phone users.

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The table below shows the percantage of mobile phones owners using various mobile features in 2006 2008 and 2010

Shopping is the favourite pastime of most of the young people. Why is this the case? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities in their free time?

Some people think that success in life coms from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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