the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.
The Line graph illustrates three different crime types burglary,car theft and robbery in
centre
of Manchester Correct article usage
the centre
city
between 2003 and 2012.
Capitalize word
City
Overall
,bulglary
had the highest crime rates in the in the early years.Correct your spelling
burglary
Furthermore
,car theft has gained more cases over the years.In the area of bulgarly crimes
the cases of crimes decreased from 2005 to 2009. the end of period car theft has fluctuated beginning from Add a comma
crimes,
the
2003 to the end of 2009 with above 2000 and 2500 changed around 1000 cases between 2009 and 2012.
Change the article
apply
on the other
hand
the robbery rate went up from 500 to 900 until 2005.Add a comma
hand,
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