the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.

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The Line graph illustrates three different crime types burglary,car theft and robbery in

centre

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the centre

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of Manchester

city

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City

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between 2003 and 2012.

Overall

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bulglary

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burglary

had the highest crime rates in the in the early years.

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,car theft has gained more cases over the years.In the area of bulgarly

crimes

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crimes,

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the cases of crimes decreased from 2005 to 2009. the end of period car theft has fluctuated beginning from

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2003 to the end of 2009 with above 2000 and 2500 changed around 1000 cases between 2009 and 2012.

on the other

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hand

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the robbery rate went up from 500 to 900 until 2005.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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fluctuating
anomalies
external factors
economic fluctuation
law enforcement strategies
societal changes
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interpretation
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strategies
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the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.

Some people believe zoos are good places for people to learn about animals. Other people believe animals belong in nature and it is wrong to keep them in zoos. What do you think? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. what measure can be taken to prevent it.

Today, there are more television channels than ever before. Some people think this leads to more choices for television viewers. Others, however, believe this causes the quality of television programmes to decline. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. although some of these chanes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?