In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons and include any relevant examples.

In recent times, articles and dramas that contain fiction and acts of felony are gaining more popularity and their trend is increasing day by day.In my opinion,
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generation tends to enjoy thriller and suspense genres more often and
therefore
spends an ample amount of time watching them and my personal preference is
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in it. First of all,
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the advancement of
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Internet
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where every television show is in just
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the
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reach of touch, not only a variety of shows broadcast daily but
also
books and teleshows from the past and native language are converted to
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language.
for example
, The
money heist
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aired language was Spanish but
due to
huge success, all seasons were later translated into English. A similar case was with the Korean drama Squid Game, which not only generated enormous revenue but
also
hit the box office worldwide.
Furthermore
, after the invention of popular shows and movie streaming applications like Netflix and Amazon Prime, these
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series became
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worldwide.
Secondly
, these fiction and violation papers and shows release dopamine and epinephrine,
thus
creating a sense of happiness and flight and fight response at the same time.
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the audience experiences
such
drift which is similar to consuming weed or marijuana, so
due to
its aura the viewers constantly search and scroll through stories similar in nature.
On the contrary
, these unlawful videos and papers taught new ways of crime to the masses
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the rate of which continues to increase in recent times.
For example
, in one of the stories, the robber killed the victim with a knife made of ice,
thus
leaving no clue of it.
Further
, It
also
pollutes young minds and teaches them new ways to harm the norms.
to conclude
, In my opinion, a balance is required
while
reading and watching the media which contain
such
a sensitive subject and a child who is not more than eighteen years of age should watch it as excessive usage of anything is not only harmful to himself but
also
to
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society.
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