In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons and include any relevant examples.

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In recent times, articles and dramas that contain fiction and acts of felony are gaining more popularity and their trend is increasing day by day.In my opinion,

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generation tends to enjoy thriller and suspense genres more often and

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spends an ample amount of time watching them and my personal preference is

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in it. First of all,

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where every television show is in just

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reach of touch, not only a variety of shows broadcast daily but

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books and teleshows from the past and native language are converted to

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language.

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, The

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aired language was Spanish but

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huge success, all seasons were later translated into English. A similar case was with the Korean drama Squid Game, which not only generated enormous revenue but

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hit the box office worldwide.

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, after the invention of popular shows and movie streaming applications like Netflix and Amazon Prime, these

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worldwide.

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, these fiction and violation papers and shows release dopamine and epinephrine,

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creating a sense of happiness and flight and fight response at the same time.

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the audience experiences

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drift which is similar to consuming weed or marijuana, so

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its aura the viewers constantly search and scroll through stories similar in nature.

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, these unlawful videos and papers taught new ways of crime to the masses

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the rate of which continues to increase in recent times.

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, in one of the stories, the robber killed the victim with a knife made of ice,

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leaving no clue of it.

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pollutes young minds and teaches them new ways to harm the norms.

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, In my opinion, a balance is required

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reading and watching the media which contain

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a sensitive subject and a child who is not more than eighteen years of age should watch it as excessive usage of anything is not only harmful to himself but

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society.

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Structure

Try to maintain a clear structure throughout your essay, with distinct paragraphs for introduction, main body, and conclusion.

Cohesion

Use linking words to improve the flow of your essay, making it easier for readers to follow your argument.

Relevance

Ensure that your examples are directly linked to the points you are making, enhancing the strength of your argument.

Grammar

Proofread your essay for minor grammatical inaccuracies and spelling mistakes to improve clarity.

Examples

You've provided relevant examples to support your points, like the references to 'The Money Heist' and 'Squid Game', which strengthens your argument.

Task Response

Your essay addresses the task well, discussing both the popularity of crime fiction and expressing your personal opinion on the matter.

Conclusion

Your conclusion neatly summarizes your viewpoint, effectively rounding off the essay.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

343 words

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