The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.

The bar chart represents data nearly the

number

of abroad

Japanese

tourists

from 1985 to 1995.

Overall

, as can be clearly seen from the bar charts,

firsly

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firstly

first

in 1985, about 5

million

Japanse

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Japanese

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tourists

traveled

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travelled

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abroad later in 1986, the

number

of

Japanese

going abroad increased by approximately 2

million

. The

number

of

Japanese

tourists

traviling

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travelling

has rapid increase since 1990 and

approximately

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11

million

.

On the other hand

, in 1991, a decline in the

number

of

Japanese

tourists

going abroad

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observed, approximately 2

million

decreases.

Also

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growth resumes in subsequent years. In 1992, the

nmber

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number

of

Japanese

tourists

going abroad

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uped

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up

used

by about 4

million

and

then

in 1994, it jumped again by about 4

million

.

At the end

in

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1995, the

number

of

tourists

increased significantly to about

million

and

thus

the largest

number

of foreign

tourists

traveled

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travelled

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in

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this

year