The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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number of

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percentage of the

population

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in four

asian

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Asian

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countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020

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then

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for 2030 and 2040.

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,what stands out from the graph is that there were

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upward trends in the percentage of the

populatin

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population

of both

indonesia

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Indonesia

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and

malaysia

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Malaysia

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,

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the

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population

of

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the philippines

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philippines

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Philippines

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and

thailand

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Thailand

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saw a strikingly upward the period in question. Another interesting point is that

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the malaysia

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malaysia

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population

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will rise more than others.

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population

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the population

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cities of

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the philippines

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philippines

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Philippines

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and

thailand

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started at around 30% and 19% respectively in1970,

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there

were

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a

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imarginally

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marginally

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to under 50 % and 27% respectively in1990

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there was a fluctuation over the next 30 years at which point it will increase at just 50% and around 40% respectively until2040,if we look at

population

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cities of

indonesia

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Indonesia

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and

malaysia

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Malaysia

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started at 12% and 30% respectively in1970 .

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were rapidly went

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rapidly went

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up to 49% and70% in 2020 and we see there will

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sharply to 55% and 80% in 2040.