In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people believe that
women
are solely responsible for running the house
chores
, and
thus
, the term "housewife" became famous in the early 1800s century in India.
However
, the other side of the people
believe
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that
women
and
men
are both responsible for housework and if the
home
job is segregated well is a good sign of equality amongst both
the
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genders. I here believe the latter. On the one hand, The belief of the old society in my country, India, is because of the patriarchal way of thinking that
that
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was established because
men
were the bread earners in the early century and
thus
,
women
stay
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home
for food, safety and managing
home
chores
.
however
, as society became progressive,
women
were encouraged to work, and
this
led
tol
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to
and emotional well-being of
women
as well as
me better
financian
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financial
financing
. To exemplify, As per the Hindustan
times
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the
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report in 2009 on family welfare, says that, Working
women
tend to be happier which
led
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to
overall
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happiness of the family.
Although
,
Women
staying at
home
had benefits like childcare
but
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, the Disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Women
staying at
home
didn't
aquire
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require
acquire
much
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skills and they tend to have low confidence and lesser
self esteems
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self-esteem
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.
For instance
, In
society
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a bread earner is regarded as the head of the family and
this
led to
women
sacrificing in their
marraige
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marriage
as they were solely homemakers and they had to depend on the other gender for their basic needs.
Thus
, managing
home
chores
and finances helps
men
and
women
to work like equals, it
also
gives opportunity to the males to spend more time with family and have a balanced life.
To conclude
, I am in support of working
women
and working
men
sharing equal responsibilities of
home
chores
this
will
led
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to equality and a balanced life amongst both
the
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genders.
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